[大学英语四级考试作文点评]作文题目：一次性塑料袋的问题 1、一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2、由此带来的问题 3、限制一次性塑料袋的意义 点评： 选题意义： 这个题目属于社会类话题，但是与大学生的生活密切相...+阅读

整体不错，英语功底很好。

个人觉得这篇文章在连接词上多用一些会更好，至少读起来更顺一些。

唔，怎么说呢，比如那个convenient，楼主就用了3次，是不是有点多，你可以换一下别的，像benefit，或者是用with的结构……

当然，还有些词组，像under no condition,from my part of view 啊什么的也可以用。

不过这个文章已经是很不错了O（∩_∩）O~

个人意见，楼主看看就行啊O（∩_∩）O

那个：some would like to use an e-dictionary，用preper 句式怎么样？

还有，一些关联词的话，可以用，what's more , as far as I am concerned. In face of not only……but also（这个用倒装句）等等。O（∩_∩）O~

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