[［英语四级作文］我的英语老师]If you want to make some progress in English, you may e to our class. My En glish teacher, Mrs. Han, can content you without any doubt. But before the class beg...+阅读
Nowadays,more and more people use credit cards instead of carrying a large AMOUNT OF CASH， 没有说a large of money的，后面也有 Firstly,the people use credit card without a large of money， 不过这句意思上也有点怪 我猜你是说拿了信用卡就不用带大量现金了 首先people 前不用the,when people use credit cards instead of cash,it's more convenient and safe，然后。。。more and more customers use credit cards can reduce...有问题，using吧， ...FOR the workers
请英语高手帮我点评我的英语四级作文语法用词非常感谢
1， 第二句中：are opened for free.
2,it has a purpose ？ 此处最好用，There's a purpose 或者直接用状语从句：nowdays more and more museums are opened for free to attract the people ,especially the students to visit them ,which show the culture relics and the society's develop.
3.＂It is a beneficial activity.＂已经下结论？应该是 many people think .....
4 ,free admission have ？ 单复数
5，第三段第一句为废话
6,it will lead to the order in mess，中应为 lead the order in mass
7,the public environment is also a serious problem that a part of visitors always throw away the plastic bottles and papers everywhere能看出我哪里改动来了吗？
8 So many workers who work in the museums think that the museums shouldn't opened freely. 中 who work in 去掉，将后面的shoudn't 中的not 提前为，don't think that 后面为肯定句。
9 I think the museum should open freely ,but it can limit the quantity of people every day. BUT 改为AND can -MAY .
10 最后一句中，who 应该去掉，visiting 已经是后置定语。后面的museums去掉。
如果总分25分的话，可以得12分左右。 主题不清晰，是一大问题。
请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文语法用词
＂ Mute English＂among Chinese students
A phenomonon of ＂Mute English＂appears among Chinese students because they can't TALK IN English to with their classmates ,friends and foreigners.
There are two reasons for this situation.First ,most of Chinese students STUDY English for their examinationS ,they pay more attention to written testS and neglect of spoken language .It is a failURE to ChinA'S education .SecondLY ,many Chinese students are so shy and unconfident in English class THAT they always LISTEN carefully ,but not put up their hands to answer teacher's questions .
If the Chinese students solve this problem ,as I see it ,they must cover the following points:first ,don't study hard for examiationS,but FOR the konwledge; secondLY,they should pay attention to spoken lanuage ; AT last,if they meet the foreigner in A supermarket or A restaurant ,they should talk with the foreign people boldly.
In a word,learning English or another foreign lanuage is AN interesting THING ,not a burden.WE shouldn't study only for examinationS.
求改四级作文语法词汇使用之类的硬伤改下最主要的是句子的变换和
With china's entering into WTO, from economic, political and cultural aspects, Chinese have more chances to communicate with foreigners than before. Thus, people emphasize the importance of English learning. However, an interesting phenomenon which I have found among students is that they pay little attention to spelling.
I think there are two reasons why this happens. Firstly, with more experts claiming that the significant purpose of English learning is communication, students put more efforts in speaking but ignore their spelling. Secondly, the laziness of students stops them from remembering the spelling completely, which leads to their mistaken spelling.
Faced with such phenomenon, we should take measures immediately. To teachers, they should encourage students to focus on spelling and check students' spelling from time to time. To students, they should build a habit to concentrate on wrong spelling when learning English. To schools, they should organize some exams about the spelling ability of students so as to improve the accuracy of spelling
你的作文也有很多spelling的错误啊同学
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