Good morning/ afternoon. My name is XX. I am twenty.
First please allow me to apologize for my oral english which as you may see is not perfect.
I graduated from Shanghai Communication Polytecnic. My major is Applied automobile technology.
My hobbies are soccer and music.
I hope you company can give me an opportunity of learning.
I am convinced i will not let you down.
至于最后一句我觉得不是口语不好而是听力理解不太好,但是你是去面试没必要把自己的缺点加以强调啊。
故为 Sorry, I am afraid I did not understand what you mean.
我尽量写短些的句子,免得你到时候记错了反而效果不好。
我建议你还是用短句,捡容易的会说的上,别贪复杂漂亮的句子。