[英语作文：高一年级将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛]Dear friends,I am very glad that we are going to hold English Speaking Competition annually today. The chief aim of holding the English Speaking Competition is...+阅读

总体上来看，文章写的是有一定水平的，不过作为一篇好的作文评价，我觉得有一点你要注意，那就是文章一定不要消极，例如：I hate, I hate a thing,which is called lifetime,is a short life.这一句你要表达的心情我能够理解，毕竟生命是宝贵的，它很短暂，能不能发挥它的价值，就看你是怎样看待它的，我个人认为诸如If I could live in the world for ever……，If I could live in the world for ever……这些句子应该在作文中（尤其是大型考试的作文）尽量不要出现，文章应尽量表现出积极的，向上的生活态度和价值观，另外文中：北戴河 这个词一定要用 Beidaihe，不要用中文，其他的注意语法和单词拼写就可以了，it was very bright WITH the black cloud.大写部分个人认为改为IN 或 ON比较合适。

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