[雅思剑5第一篇小作文希望大牛帮助改改顺便给个分数谢谢]个别单词有拼写错误哦，第二句lower than改为（just） under更好，“but the percentage of Sweden rose more rapidly than USA”,USA前加that of,“between 1990 and 2015 with a...+阅读

上升：increase, rise (up), climb (up), soar, rocket (to), go up, surge, growth

下降：decrease, decline, fall, drop, sink, reduce, reduction,

波动：fluctuate, fluctuation

持平：stabilize, remain the same level,remain stable,remain constant

差不多这些吧~

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