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[我的一天英语作文80字]Yesterday was sunday .First.I got up at eight o'clock.After this.I spend two o'clock on finished my homework.And nect.I went shopping with my mother.In market ....+阅读

题目是“愿景”

黛玉,你知道吗

去年今日此门中,人面桃花相映红。人面不知何处去,桃花依旧笑春风。إ

——题记إ

黛玉,你知道吗?每当我闭上眼睛,脑海中就会浮现一个场面,就会想到你

的香消玉殒。于是,我的心中充满阴霾,我也就失去了所有的愿景。إ残阳

如血,秋风萧瑟。桃花帘内,你空对的是菱花镜中的瘦影,空对的是昏暗的

照壁,空对的是画着秋景的屏风,空对的是余晖下的雕栏玉砌。那么,此时

的你,是否也在思考着什么,你是否也有自己的愿景?إ我想是有的。可是

,你的愿景仿佛眼前的落花,在风中翩跹,跳着最美的舞,它们却终究是要

落的啊!“花谢花飞飞满天,红消香断有谁怜?……侬今葬花人笑痴,他年葬

侬知是谁?……”吟着《葬花词》,你用锦囊收集落英,让它们“质本洁来

还洁去”,你用净土埋葬落花的同时,也将自己美好的愿景一同埋葬在苍穹

尽头的香丘里ت。إ

你是有愿景的,只是它们已经死了,不是吗?你无法阻止它们的死去,甚至

是你的死去。你是一株空谷幽兰,你不属于那个淮扬的小巷,也不属于金陵

监盐御史的那个幽深的宅院,你更不属于那个风凄露冷的潇湘馆,你只属于

三生石畔那个完美的世界。面对世俗的土壤,肮脏的河水,你会水土不服的

!那么,你以及你的愿景的萎蔫,凋零,又何尝不是一种必然呢?إ你的泪水

从脸颊落下,落到火红的薛涛笺上,化作无尽的诗情。你的诗中,流淌着对

爱情、生命以及一切美好事物的向往,流淌着你那带着淡淡哀愁的愿景。现

在,我终于明白了,你拥有这个世界上最美好的愿景!我不能没有愿景,否

则,恰恰是对你的曲解!如果我们是好朋友,你也一定不允许我这样做的,

对吗?إ

对!我要让奋斗的泪水浸透我的芽儿,让牺牲的血雨洒满我的身躯,

追求一切美好事物,实现我的、你的未竟的愿景,化作历史长河中永恒的一

瓣馨香!即使有一天,我已化为一团春泥,可我已实现了自己的愿景,我曾

经散发的馥郁馨香,将布满世界的每个角落!إ我又一次闭上了眼。我看到

了你弱柳扶风的身影,看到了你的风鬟雾鬓。

这次,你笑了——笑靥如花。

赏析:圆的温和与星的气质

远,规矩。宝钗宽容与温和的品性似园,既包容所有,又关心、帮助他人,心胸宽广。星,新颖。黛玉坚强而率真的心灵似星,既承受了家庭的不幸,又敢于去追求属于自己的幸福。园与星,各具魅力。

作者以怪异奇特的标题,别具匠心的结构,独到别致的选材,精彩深情的演说,为读者演绎了一段优美诗篇。本文独辟蹊径,将视角锁定《红楼梦》,锁定大观园,锁定大家闺秀宝钗,锁定温柔如水的黛玉,来展开联想议论,并且以散文化的语言,娓娓道出“园与星”这做人的道理,作者立意深远,主旨鲜明,视角新颖,文笔细腻,突显了其思考的深度和思想的高度,是一篇感性真挚,措辞委婉的文学评论。

条条大路通罗马,用经典著作中的人物诠释话题为我们开辟了选择素材的一扇新窗。

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