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We take a holiday of 7 days because of the National Day.As we all know,October 1 is the National Day of China in Gregorian calendar. In the holiday I went to visit the Yellow River Forest Park togeter with three of my classmates.It was very boring when staying in the bus for a long time,which made me doze off all the time,and at some time,I nearly struck my head on the chair in the front of me.After two hours' journery by bus,we finally got to the park.But to my disappoint,there was nothing intresting here,which were quiet normal things.Compared with the my school I stayed in,here was very noisy and messy. Though the park is beside the Yellow River,the air is still a little smelly because there are a lot of animals such as horses,cocks and so on here,which make lots of wastes every day while few people clean them.In a word,the park is not so good as I had expected,and I felt unsatisfied about it. National Day is celebrated the birth of our national holiday, stay at home and go out to travel is based on personal practice, it if workers exhaustion of body and mind can take this time go out to relax, if is students' homework more words can stay at home watching writing composition learning, also can surf the Internet with good friends to chat, see friends during holidays to see what fun things and people exchanges together or and family education significance is watching a movie is also very good website designer. In short a happy National Day. In the holiday I went to visit the Yellow River Forest Park togeter with three of my classmates.It was very boring when staying in the bus for a long time,which made me doze off all the time,and at some time,I nearly struck my head on the chair in the front of me.After two hours' journery by bus,we finally got to the park.But to my disappoint,there was nothing intresting here,which were quiet normal things.Compared with the my school I stayed in,here was very noisy and messy. Though the park is beside the Yellow River,the air is still a little smelly because there are a lot of animals such as horses,cocks and so on here,which make lots of wastes every day while few people clean them.In a word,the park is not so good as I had expected,and I felt unsatisfied about it.

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