[介绍长城的英语作文]The Great Wall 【By Kaiser3344】 The Great Wall of China is considered to be the only man-made project visible from the moon. Although it was once thought to ha...+阅读
小学语文作文批改评语范例
字迹A
本子清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏……
端端正正的字迹，
让人看了真舒服……你的字像印的一样漂亮……很
惭愧，我字没有你写的好看……
B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的……字不在格子中间，当
然看起来不顺眼……你的字东倒西歪，
是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的……我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么潦草……认真耐心地
写，你会写的比我还要棒……
内容 A
这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀……你的习作有血有肉，读起来真是一大享受……你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾……你平时肯定爱看作文书，才写出这么多字…… 语句A
流畅生动的语句，好似庐山瀑布，飞流直下，通顺极了……比喻得十分贴切，说明你一向观察细心……你怎么想出这么巧妙的拟
人句的……反问句运用在这里多么合适……这个感叹句表达了你当时真实的感情……古诗引用恰到好处，我以后也要把学过的诗用到作文中去……歇后语用的妙啊妙啊，把我肚子都笑疼了……
B
作文疙疙瘩瘩，读起来很难受如同走在乡下凹凸不平的小路上，不小心就容易跌一跤……句子像被谁切断了，不完整……写好
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