[［英语四级作文］我的英语老师]If you want to make some progress in English, you may e to our class. My En glish teacher, Mrs. Han, can content you without any doubt. But before the class beg...+阅读

高考英文作文的话我只能说下正常向高分议论文标准，其他文体什么的考到可能性小标准也可以类推。 英语作文是有一个评分标准的，所以改作文都是按评分标准里的要求去改...要想知道最明确的改分根据去看那个最好了，一般的模拟卷答案里都会提到的，不过那个比较概，我这里稍微细说一点（那个原话我也记不住...）。 老师阅卷一般是先看字数、结构完不完整；之后再顺序粗粗过一遍，看文章整个主线如何，主题句（有的作文题会要求第一段表明观点）、观点段中心句、收尾之类；再然后看词法句法是否有误。

所以文章一要耐看二要无误三要亮眼。 下面我稍微写点拿正常向高分的建议（老师也有个人口味的...当然我只能把通吃的版本特点概述一下，不需要的话就可以不用往下看了）： 首先结构要漂亮。 类似1-3-1的八股文型比较稳，起头稍微引入一下底气不足不要开门见山生硬地放观点；中间部分每段起头放小观点，句式整齐一点但尽量不要重复用词，注意每小段的长度均匀；最后一段重复观点，有机会的话跟第一段照应（同句型之类的）更好。

其次用词要好看。 忌用小词和重复词，通篇用词没水准会给老师留下不好的印象；适量插入大词长词（也不要太多否则会导致阅读疲劳）。运用大量同义词更佳（同句型忌用重复词）。 最后通篇要易读。 不是简单易懂的意思，是指要让老师读起来舒服。长短句穿插会让文章看起来舒服自然（比如小段的句型用成＂短-长-短-长-长＂这样）；也要多用不同的句型（各种从句、语态、被动、强调之类），否则文章会有单调感；注意调整每个段落长度，第一段最后一段不宜过长，中间的观点段长度应该差不多。

另外这样写出来的作文也就是朴素的良品，补上高光会更好看。在干涩的议论文插一两句引用的谚语熟语妙语（太常见的就不必了会显得俗气，所以最好背一点通用名言来），或者是实际数字、事例，还有稍微有趣点的句子比如描写修辞之类。 嗯差不多就这么多吧，还有疑问的话可以留言问我= w =。

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