[我的一天英语作文80字]Yesterday was sunday .First.I got up at eight o'clock.After this.I spend two o'clock on finished my homework.And nect.I went shopping with my mother.In market ....+阅读
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我给你谈谈我对写作文的一些看法与一些经验总结吧!
1..分段意识,即三到四段
2.在第一段最好能用上些好句,绝对不可以有拼错单词的现象!
3.行文要流利,若是给出条件写作文,则必须每一点都答到,若是有不会写的单词,我们可以更换,跳过(不是指直接不写,而是整句换句);行文中不可出现汉语或汉语拼音,这是英语老师最忌讳的。
4.尾段也要像首段般,尽量使用经典句子,词组。切忌:勿标新立异。
其实我觉得,英语作文就像语文的作文一样,只是少了一直点题点中心。
很多地方都是相通的——
1.卷面整洁,相信老师一直都强调
2.文笔好。这个比较笼统,分开来说,就是要多用高级词汇、动词短语、经典句型。高考要求中,使用高级的句型尽量不要出错。
我曾经看过一篇文章——《“三板斧”打造个性书面表达)》
一、选好一个非谓语动词
I was looking forward to going to the park, so Jack and I went there last weekend. 改成——
Looking forward to going to the park, so Jack and I went there last weekend.句子变得更地道。
二、选好一个从句
My brother loves playing the violin. He had won many prizes in many compititions. Some of the competitions were held in Shanghai. 这三句话表意清楚,但过于平淡,毫无美感。 改成——
My brother ,who loves playing the violin, has won many prizes in many compititions, some of which were held in Shanghai. 换成从句则为文章添了亮点。
三、选好一个插入语
In the way, playing games can help us train cooperation spirit.这样的表达没有新鲜感,吸引不了阅卷老师的眼球。 改成——
Playing games , in the way, can help us train cooperation spirit. 让句子亮色不少。
不知道有没有打错字哈,希望能帮到你,若有疑问可继续问我,能帮忙的我尽量。
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