[如何批改作文 ppt]一、 不要写大话、套话 有些语文老师为了“见红”，就写一些套话。如“结构不完”“中心不突出”、“选材不当”、“详略不当”等等。学生看了有什么作用呢？读起来是索然无味。...+阅读

Last sunday. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to niushoushan

by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed,. Dad said to me,“Jill, don't do anything halfway.”at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, ate cold rice noodles .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept the umbrella。i was very happy

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