[那个用英语写一篇关于礼仪的文章速度要快哈!非常急!]Modern etiquette. The ritual "ceremony" refers to the respect, that is, in interpersonal relations should not only respect themselves and respect other people. Gu...+阅读
In a dark somber street, has a huge but old house. There is only a few lights appeared from the window. This house belongs to a old captain named Erick. Mendoza. And now, Mendoza is torturing the magnate Marvin. Nieto. "Tell me! Where is the map of krypton? The home of Clark Kent!” Mendoza looks very mad. "No, I already promised Clark. Even if you kill me." ill-humored Mendoza stamp with fury, killed Marvin and throw him to the river. The next day, people found out that died body in the river is Marvin. Clark Kent is so worried about that. Marvin's died notice him that he still has army. He soon got an idea, find the killer, and duel with him. But how is he going to find him. This formidable adversary even can find his secrecy man! And now, he only has two secrecy men. The more secrecy men die, the magic is weaker. So, the superman went to see those two secrecy men, but as soon as he reached there, they were gone. Luckily, he found the letter, which wrote by Mendoza. It says, come to Rolland hill, or they will DIE! So the superman, Clark, fly to the hill, but he see no one there. He quickly realized the enemy tricked him. Suddenly, when Clark turned around, a green sharp diamond flied to him. He jinked, by the sudden he jinks; he saw Mendoza was holding the secrecy men. “Leave them, I'll duel with you.” “Hmm, what about I have those diamonds that can hurt you?” “Alright. But don't hurt them.” “Ha, you were still thinking of them? Stop! They told me about the map!” Superman suddenly got very mad. He punches Mendoza on his face, and save the two secrecy men. A few days later, the truth came out. Those secrecy men are very loyal; they didn't told Mendoza about that. As you know, Mendoza hurt the superman by the diamonds. Because of superman are very strong and the cut is not very deep, he just get well in a few days, and keep saving people from danger. 累死了,我的想象力脑细胞全死光光啦。
雨情同学,怎么样啊?我可是参考了《harry potter》、《亚森 . 罗平》。不过对白多了点。还有,一楼,你的语法错误有很多,而且最大的错误是你把superman写成了supperman,不过还蛮不错的。 哦,对啦。总共有356个词。
21世纪梦想英语作文
I am a student in the twenty-first century . I always dream of becoming an astronaut in the future.Because the science and technology are developing very fast, many people can have the opportunity to travel abroad in the near future. If I can become an astronaut, I will take some young people to space to experience the excitement and get a knowledge of the universe.And I can encourage the young people to become more interested in science and technology,which is good to our society.In order to achieve my dream ,I must study hard to get more knowledge for the future use.Because I know that only by working hard can I make my dream come true.so i can do it, and i believe in myself,so my friend, come on, to support me. i like it!
高中英语作文
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
英语竞赛作文真心求语法纠正高分!
第一部分先将改动的地方标出,第二部分改动的原因,第三部分改完后的定稿:第一部分:Boy: Don't worry, Mom and Dad. I promise ⑴【not to make any mistake you've ever】 made.Standing on the shoulders of giants“If I have seen farther than others, it is because I was standing on the shoulders of giants.” Isaac Newton said it in 1672 when he ⑵【first】 brought ⑶【forward】 ⑷■The Particles of Light Said■ which made him well-known ⑸【to the whole world】 或 【all over the world】. What he said was to tell us that we are supposed to do something 【farsightedly】 and based on the predecessors' experiences. Just like the boy ⑹【in】 the picture, he just wanted to show his parents that he ⑺【wouldn't】 make ⑻【any mistake that his parents had ever made.】⑼【It was obvious that he had beared his parents' words in his mind and he had also drawn lessons from the failures of his life and the experiences of his parents.】He ⑽【had】 realized how to be a qualified college student, how to be a real man, how to deal with the matters, how to take care of himself ⑾【and how to sum up experience and draw lessons in the days to come.】 Just ⑿【as】 Newton said, reference is really important. Newton's success ⒀【comes from both his natural endowments and great efforts,】 ⒁【but the predecessors' achievements are also indispensible,】 so Newton ⒂【paid】 his respect to the predecessors. ⒃【As a matter of fact, there are more giants and more ways to study today than what Newton had more than four hundredyeas ago.】 Why ⒄【do】 people ⒅【develop】 some traditional ⒆【teachings ?】? Because ⒇【these teachings ?】 can help us deeply understand the problems. Therefore, (21)【by standing on the shoulders of giants we can look at problems all-sidedly and thoroughly.】So (22)【not only should a person think independently, but also】 be good at thinking of the past teachings. There are lots of giants (23)【before us】, and they're also a reason to delight. Do we need (24)【to】 fear while we (25)【are】 standing on the shoulders of giants (26)【省略】? The answer is surely “No”. So (27)【just keep calm】 when we feel puzzled, think (28)【it over and over】, and draw (29)【more experience from the predecessors,】 At last, we will (30)【suddenly be】 enlightened.(31)【To sum it up,】 the giant's shoulder (32)【enable us to see farther and more clearly】 !第二部分:1. 不是只犯父母没犯过的错误,而是不重复犯父母曾经犯过的错误。
意思有区别;2. firstly是指在列名单时排在第一,或说话时的第一点,first才是指做事情排在别人前面;3. bring forward 才是“提出理论、观点”的意思,而bring up是“教育、养育”的意思,没有提出的意思;4. 你想说的应该是“光子说”,但The Particles of Light Said明显是硬翻的,我觉得应该是"The theory of photon",具体还是请教物理方面的专业人员或书籍;5. 世界闻名应该这样表示(两种都可以); farsightedly意思是“有远见地”,没有foresightedly这个单词;6. 介词不对;7. 要用过去将来时,保持时态一致;8. any用在否定句中,表示不犯任何错误,用that引导的定语从句修饰mistake, 表示是父母犯过的错误;9. 把……记在心里,英语应该是bear/keep sth in one's mind, 你用的remember sth in the heart是典型的中式英语;时态不统一;前面是his, 这里又是their,不统一,全句都调整了;10. 还是时态问题,要用过去完成时;11. 意思不完整,应该是“在今后的日子里,总结经验,吸取教训”,也重写了;12. 正如……,后面接从句时,介词应该用as;13. 这样说才是地道的英语表达习惯,你的中国腔太浓:14. previous work不如直接说predecessors' achievements (前人的成果),你想表达的意思是“前人的成果也是必不可少的”,应该用indispensible,inseparable意思是不能分开的,也是中式英语,不符合英语的习惯;15. 表示尊敬,动词用pay, 很少用express, 因为你是先想中文,再翻成英语,难免会有中式英语的痕迹;16. 你的原句错误太多,且切不通顺,索性根据你的意思重写;17. 疑问句中少了助动词;18. 你的意思应该是“发扬、传承、发展”,用develop更地道;19. 你的teachings想表示何意,好像用法有问题,没直接改,等搞清楚再改比较好;20. 同上;21. 根据你的意思,改成:站在巨人的肩膀上,我们看(思考)问题更全面、更深入。
你原来的语句有错误、意思不到位;22. need to 改为should, 表达“应该做……”更通顺;not only……but also 可以用倒装句,演讲时显得语句更生动,有变化;23. in front of 是表示空间上的概念,而巨人是过去的人,是时间上的概念,应该用before;24. 漏了不定式标志to;25. 现在进行时,漏了系动词are;26. 多余,应删除;27. 演讲进入总结阶段,用祈使句可加强语气,表明观点,吸引听众注意;s...
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